tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post3609680586448579293..comments2023-07-08T14:17:26.893+05:30Comments on Soul Space: The Pain Of Satisfaction - Part 3Thousif Razahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05355491264283439692noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-34504284064659531502009-08-01T10:48:26.443+05:302009-08-01T10:48:26.443+05:30@ pawan: i and my cousin brother were editing this...@ pawan: i and my cousin brother were editing this pawan and suddenly my aunt well unwell so everyone got into her care, so editing is all in a mess here yaar, thx a ton for your comments, and no yaar commets are never negetive, cause they help you write better<br /><br />filmy, hmm you r the first one to say that, :) i am glad that you liked it, take care and send in your valuable comments everytime like this so that i can improve for the better, tcThousif Razahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05355491264283439692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-81714579333847254352009-07-31T22:49:52.179+05:302009-07-31T22:49:52.179+05:30Mate,
A lot of typos and errors in there. Just rec...Mate,<br />A lot of typos and errors in there. Just rectify them. You should keep in mind that, Aspirin and Nausea do not have plural forms, hope you get me. <br /><br />It is important to sustain the readers interests while making them read long posts, and these kind of errors can be irritating.<br /><br />Apart from that, the story has some intense moments though quite filmy I enjoyed it!<br /><br />P.S: Please do bear in mind that I am not giving negative comments about the story but some feedback for improvement! Hope you understand.<br /><br />Cheers!pawanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07623152354184765339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-54868936316960180712009-07-31T10:29:47.170+05:302009-07-31T10:29:47.170+05:30@ anwesa: :)
@ Amanda: hey i follow your blog ya,...@ anwesa: :)<br /><br />@ Amanda: hey i follow your blog ya, and no thanking, we are blog buddies remember???<br /><br />@ choco: thank so much for the comment take care......Thousif Razahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05355491264283439692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-79527278750654892652009-07-31T00:08:55.520+05:302009-07-31T00:08:55.520+05:30Wow...Didn't see that coming..Acceptance pitte...Wow...Didn't see that coming..Acceptance pitted against hatred.....Interesting twist...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-2920018683827479012009-07-30T19:07:24.000+05:302009-07-30T19:07:24.000+05:30Thank god for the stranger with the laptop! Poor F...Thank god for the stranger with the laptop! Poor Farhana. But we will wait for more! Thanks for stopping by!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15826069692186367640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-48044475790597640102009-07-30T17:38:26.401+05:302009-07-30T17:38:26.401+05:30the plot thickens...awaiting the high-voltage next...the plot thickens...awaiting the high-voltage next part.i would very much like to know about this lil' girl's journey..Anwesahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282981779361344562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-6904347347779335632009-07-30T11:35:39.846+05:302009-07-30T11:35:39.846+05:30@ keshi thank you again, i tried to put a little h...@ keshi thank you again, i tried to put a little hope on this one, thank you again, take careThousif Razahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05355491264283439692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515424754580678998.post-17643410875749749722009-07-30T11:22:29.262+05:302009-07-30T11:22:29.262+05:30This post gives a voice to all those innocents aff...This post gives a voice to all those innocents affected by senseless hatred.<br /><br />Very well-written and I like this song alot...one of my favs.<br /><br />Keshi.Keshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147250771662427208noreply@blogger.com