I have never dreamed after i saw you
After that day, i never needed to
With your touch
That rock became a heart.
No questions arise and answers surprise
There lie no expectations, of which i was once a slave
Meeting you was my biggest mistake
Stole away my sense and sleep
But that is something i will never regret to keep.
Once, God didn’t exist
And now I Believe.
That river flowing by is so merciless
It took you away for the morning next
My eyes search for some sunshine in yours
For it enlivens that rock and seeks for more
Promises i make are my commandments today
And this even death would obey.
Dont worry, i am not in love :P, but couple of dayz back, emotions made me say these lines...
i wrote a rough(Read: Hopeless) copy and asked tulika for advice, and she has perfected it, into this..... Thank you very very much tulika, for finding its true soul.... :)
Xams will be there so i wont be available for this month, (miss me ok ;))
Will be missing all you guyz :)
till next time..... take care :)
28 comments:
hmmmm,too much love shove happening Thousif and advice seeking also :) kya baat hai??
all d best for ur exams.
Its really sweet of you for the special mention there but the expression is yours, I just did a bit of grooming. All praises to you.
best of luck for ur exams .. :)
@ sulagna: kuch nahi ji, kaha n bas thoughts hai :P, but thx for the concern
@ all: thank you very much, but poem ke bare may nobody has said, so bad kya? :(
Happy New Year :)
Someone is going all lovey-dovey! :);)
Happy New Year!
nice lines :)
Ah-mazing lines :D
you're having exmas??? Oh GOOD LUCK then!
blog soon!
i try and make my relations a learning experience rather than a regretful one
This is a lovely poem. very much echoes my sentiments too. Great job!!
P.S. : There's a surprise for you on my blog,it'll be unveiled on 12th Jan, 12AM.
@ Harshita:Thank you hai ji thank you wish you the same :)
@ akansha: now you too ;). hmmm ji and its good to c ya back, happy new year
@ sorcerer: Thx man, keep visitng :)
@ Qm: at last some appreciation for the poem, thank u thank you really honored :)
@ sanely insane: its the same for me too ;), glad to c ya back.. keep visiting
@ anwesa: very much echoes my sentiments... hmm hmmm makes me wanna think, thank you for the appreciation and that was surprise... i am really surprised :), thank you so very much :)
very light and touchy lines..
my 1st tym here..
cool lines,i mus say..
so loved d post!
nice work :)
love no matter how ephemeral the concept, always makes up for the best inspiration there can ever be!
@ heavenly muse: thank you, thank you :)
@ pooja: hey welcome to my blog... and thank you very much for the appreciation
@ prr: good too see you back here pri, you got me with those words, love ahhh sweet ;), take care
hey... great lines and meaning... n m sure Tulika did her best!
.hi
Beautiful piture with beautiful words. :)
@ pooja: hey welcomt to my blog, and i am glad you liked the lines... tc
@ sheeza: hey hi from my side too :)
@ chandrika: thank you so very much for the comment and for following to :) take care
well i hope you did good in exams.. and i pray for the best results.
next thanku for stopping by on my blog and posting your precious words...
hope to see u soon again.
Good one.
All the best for ur examz!
@ sheeza: how did you get to know that(half) my xams have got over?? hmm mystery indeed :). and its my pleasure, will see you soon :), tc
@ shas: hey yaar thx... and thx for the wishes :), hope to see you back sometime....tc
Cool...achcha tha! :)
All the very best for the exams!! :)
@ shreeram: aap padhare, hamara blog to pawan ho gaya :), good to see ya back..., and thx for the wishes :)... take care
Lovely lines.:)
@ Sneha: thank you so very much... and welcome to my blog.... :)....take care
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