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Showing posts with label Anniversery 2nd. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Anniversery 2nd. Show all posts

Attempts and an Anniversary

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well after last times electryfying performance i am back to tell you about my newest obsession,

but lets start from something much forgotten, i just remembered its 2nd anniversary of my blog so "Happy anniversary 2nd to me", (i tottaly forgot my 1st one ;)), they grow up so fast na, So whoever wants to wish i will be truly greatful to them,

And on another note, the obsession i was talking about was that "I have been writing poems", but it was just for frenz who were depressed, or if it was somebody's b'day, you will get to know about it all in my coming posts, but i also got know there are other kinds of poems also, which need not rhyme all the time, (no i have not been living under a rock), reason being, i only write simily's, it just that i got to know only couple of days before that there is one type of poem writing called Acrostic.

i got to know it from a blog buddy 'Anwesa', she has written a poem called Echoes Of Silence, its the best thing i have read, it like awesomeness at its best, i truly have to thank her cause i sat back and thought of giving acrostic a try, boy its hard, i gotta tell you i had to rack out every part of my brain to write the one you will read below, i also gotta thank Kajal cause she too has written one of the best acrostic poems i have read till date, i donno how they do that, but you guys write great yaar, truly great, thanx a lot for inspiring me, the below poem is for someone long forgotten.....

So here is what i wrote, please give me honest comments even if they are brutal, cause i wanna improve,


TAKE ME AS I AM
Tried forgetting about you a 1000 times
As always have failed miserably
Kiss me or kill me, its a choice for you to make
Even eternity will seem less, to take your love away from me
Move on, says everyone, how can they understand!
Echo of the past always comes to pull me back
Angel she was, others ask, "Angel is she?"
"Sinner i am of love" i say, and always will be

In my dreams i still see you, i just want you to come back

Abondenment i face, life seems like a lie
Mirage were you or real?, its the only question i ask

hope you all like it, take care cya next time