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I have never dreamed after i saw you
After that day, i never needed to
With your touch
That rock became a heart.


No questions arise and answers surprise
There lie no expectations, of which i was once a slave
Meeting you was my biggest mistake
Stole away my sense and sleep
But that is something i will never regret to keep.


Once, God didn’t exist
And now I Believe.


That river flowing by is so merciless
It took you away for the morning next
My eyes search for some sunshine in yours
For it enlivens that rock and seeks for more
Promises i make are my commandments today
And this even death would obey.

Dont worry, i am not in love :P, but couple of dayz back, emotions made me say these lines...
i wrote a rough(Read: Hopeless) copy and asked tulika for advice, and she has perfected it, into this..... Thank you very very much tulika, for finding its true soul.... :)
Xams will be there so i wont be available for this month, (miss me ok ;))
Will be missing all you guyz :)
till next time..... take care :)

28 comments:

sulagna said...

hmmmm,too much love shove happening Thousif and advice seeking also :) kya baat hai??

manjiT said...

all d best for ur exams.

Tulika said...

Its really sweet of you for the special mention there but the expression is yours, I just did a bit of grooming. All praises to you.

Arpitha Holla said...

best of luck for ur exams .. :)

Thousif Raza said...

@ sulagna: kuch nahi ji, kaha n bas thoughts hai :P, but thx for the concern

@ all: thank you very much, but poem ke bare may nobody has said, so bad kya? :(

Harshita said...

Happy New Year :)

akanksha said...

Someone is going all lovey-dovey! :);)

Happy New Year!

Sorcerer said...

nice lines :)

QM said...

Ah-mazing lines :D

you're having exmas??? Oh GOOD LUCK then!

blog soon!

sanely insane said...

i try and make my relations a learning experience rather than a regretful one

ANWESA said...

This is a lovely poem. very much echoes my sentiments too. Great job!!

P.S. : There's a surprise for you on my blog,it'll be unveiled on 12th Jan, 12AM.

Thousif Raza said...

@ Harshita:Thank you hai ji thank you wish you the same :)

@ akansha: now you too ;). hmmm ji and its good to c ya back, happy new year

@ sorcerer: Thx man, keep visitng :)

Thousif Raza said...

@ Qm: at last some appreciation for the poem, thank u thank you really honored :)

@ sanely insane: its the same for me too ;), glad to c ya back.. keep visiting

@ anwesa: very much echoes my sentiments... hmm hmmm makes me wanna think, thank you for the appreciation and that was surprise... i am really surprised :), thank you so very much :)

Heavenly Muse said...

very light and touchy lines..

Pooja said...

my 1st tym here..

cool lines,i mus say..

so loved d post!

Pri said...

nice work :)

love no matter how ephemeral the concept, always makes up for the best inspiration there can ever be!

Thousif Raza said...

@ heavenly muse: thank you, thank you :)

@ pooja: hey welcome to my blog... and thank you very much for the appreciation

@ prr: good too see you back here pri, you got me with those words, love ahhh sweet ;), take care

Divya said...

hey... great lines and meaning... n m sure Tulika did her best!

sheeza said...

.hi

Chandrika Shubham said...

Beautiful piture with beautiful words. :)

Thousif Raza said...

@ pooja: hey welcomt to my blog, and i am glad you liked the lines... tc

@ sheeza: hey hi from my side too :)

@ chandrika: thank you so very much for the comment and for following to :) take care

sheeza said...

well i hope you did good in exams.. and i pray for the best results.

next thanku for stopping by on my blog and posting your precious words...
hope to see u soon again.

Shas said...

Good one.
All the best for ur examz!

Thousif Raza said...

@ sheeza: how did you get to know that(half) my xams have got over?? hmm mystery indeed :). and its my pleasure, will see you soon :), tc

@ shas: hey yaar thx... and thx for the wishes :), hope to see you back sometime....tc

Sreeram Shenoy said...

Cool...achcha tha! :)
All the very best for the exams!! :)

Thousif Raza said...

@ shreeram: aap padhare, hamara blog to pawan ho gaya :), good to see ya back..., and thx for the wishes :)... take care

Sneha said...

Lovely lines.:)

Thousif Raza said...

@ Sneha: thank you so very much... and welcome to my blog.... :)....take care