Some more emotions

I won’t be writing a blog post of evil m this week because I have exams.... so these are the 2 poems which i had written to help a friend for her competition. I donno if they won or not, because she is absconding after that :P, so here goes

Enjoy :)


Born in me against my will
Those carved emotions.
With wings of a fresh butterfly
Pure as morning dew.

Breaking all barriers
An addiction.
To conquer, to achieve, to live.

I am unstoppable
A Dream chaser
Nothing to lose
I will be there soon.


Grew up in your arms
Your warm shadow
Walks to school, and long rides on your back
I remember…

There you were every time
When my eyes searched for you
To support me,to guide me
You never let me down dad.

Oh how I remember your smile
When I wore my first pink gown
How you understood my silence, my little wishes
Dreams which i chased
On which they laughed
i found them
Turning true in your eyes
Angel you called me
But one you are
My first and best mate for life...

A huge thank you for Tulika who helped me with these poems, I just provided her words and she filled life into these :).Thank you again tulika…..

I have exams till 26th followed by my intership till 28th of the next month, so I don’t think I will be able to blog, miss me ok :), and when you do, send me an email :)

Take care….I’ll miss you all


Vivarjitha said...

that was a beautiful poem...all the best, yeah...will be waiting for another good post as this one!!!

Charu said...

The poems are very nice, but I particularly like the pictures accompanying them.
Wish you best of luck for your exams and the internship! Will miss you, but still...each day apart is a day closer to the next time!

QM said...

I love the poems, especially the first one :)

Good luck for your exam!!

ANWESA said...

Awesome poems ! Loved them....

All the Best for your exams and internship ! Will miss you dude !

Vyazz said...

Kewl poetry!! Bummed out that you'll be busy!!!
Newayz all d best for ur exams!!!
Will miss u here in the blogosphere!!! :(

Arpit Rastogi said...

Nice Poems Bro!
um loving it.. :P


Hv fun wid ur exams..*wicked laugh* :D

Thousif Raza said...

@ viv: thank you... and thank you :)

@ charu: oh you are so sweet :), will be be back soon :)

@ Qm: thank you... and thank you again :)

Thousif Raza said...

@ mehek: thax for the appreciation and wishes :)

@ Vyazz: oh... i'm so touched..... :) *hugs* :) take care

@ arpit: you are as cool as always :)

penelope said...

both poems amazing ....
surely u will be missed . ..! :)

akanksha said...

Loved both the poems!!!! :)
Good Luck for exams!

Thousif Raza said...

@ penelope: oh so sweet thank you ;)

@ akanksha: thank you so very much :) take care

sulagna ™ said...

oho exams k bus aur kuch din..den my lil kiddo brother will be back to his evil M !!!

Tulika said...

So sweet of you to mention me there.

My pleasure. :)

Anonymous said...

It is very difficult to write from the point of view of the opposite sex. The second poem seems so heartfelt. Nicely done.

All the best for your exams Thousif. Do us proud! :)

And hey. I am fine. Just was a little pressed for time. So wasn't really being able to read all blogs. :)

Thousif Raza said...

@ sulagna didi: yes he will be... evil m will remain evil m...

@ Tulika: its my pleasure too that i have a friend like you :)

@ Choco: thank you so very much, those wishes too were so heartfelt... loved em... :)

AB HOME Interiors said...

beautiful post Thousif!

Tulika said...

Hey, just forgot to say,


Thousif Raza said...

@ amanda: thank you :) and its good to see you back... drop by more often :)

@ tukika: thank you so very much :)

Gayatri Shenoy said...

Very well written and heart touching. Looking forward to read all your poems. All the best.


Keshi said...

very nice! Got me all nostalgic..miss my father...

hey ty so much for all the kind, sweet and caring msgs in my blog Thousif! I hope all is well with ya?


HaRy!! said...

man... that was extra ordinary..... woven with so much emotion!!! tak care.. god bles!

HaRy!! said...

lovely quotes...! good luck for yur exam broo... most imp, think the pics match v well!

Destiny's child... said...

Beautiful poems and lovely template! :)
All the best for your exams...

Shas said...

Both the poems are really good.
All the best for ur examz. Hope to see you on this space soon =)

Thousif Raza said...

Gayathri: hey gayathri... welcome to my blog... :) thx for the appreciation... :) and wishes hope to see more of you here :) tc

@ Keshi: i am good... i just want you to be ok... thx for dropping by... its great to see you after so many days... *Hugz* tc

@ hary: Dude its great to see you here... and thank you so much for the appreci's :) tc

Thousif Raza said...

Destiny's Child: Destinyji... ;) its great to see you back... and thank you :) tc

@ Shas: hey girl its nice to see ya back :) thx and you place is cool, loved the current post :)... cya soon :)

Shree Kanth said...

idiot are you writing poem? i dont konw. two poems are good keep it up